2nd Feature_Martha Graham

Proportion of the image to type has been icreased. By-line was included in the opener.

Subhead alternative 1.

Subhead alternative 2.

1st Feature

I might tone down the monochrome blue to a sephia. I think it needs to be more quiet, not pop.

On the jump spread here, I guess the pull-quote should relate to the headline text in the opener spread. I might use lowercase to achieve that, not the same distressing though. However, I do like the tonal degrading between the lines, which I'll keep.

Contents Spread (1st Draft)

Final Versions of the Department Spreads

Department "On Location"

"On Location" is a department which features

small businesses that give the city its character.

This time it's Thrift Shops.

First Department Drafts "Street Style"

Street Syle

Department Teplate

Feature Templates

My magazine is about urban lifetyle. -name TBD. For now I'm using URBAN till something better comes up.

Target Audience

• 25-35 yrs. old
• M/F
• College educated
• Urban/suburban
• Income 35K-70K

The overall layout in my first feature drafts, appeared like it was designed for a younger audience. Here, in these templates I'm trying to achieve my goal by making different type choices.

First drafts of my first feature opener

These are the first drafts of my first feature opener. As we discussed in the class, my type and photo choises make my feature openers appear as if they were designed for a younger audience, which I didn't intend to. However I do like the photos, so I want to make them work for the article. That means I need to work on the type and the layout.

This is my blog!

Hi Karen,
It was nice to meet you in person. I will be posting my feature spreads tonight.
Thanks,
A